Adaptation B: Character Design Development 41 (Concept 1 of Character in Environment- Adjusted)

In my original concept art of having my character in the environment, she seems to be out of place. Hence, I went back to make adjustments to fit her in. 

Concept 1 Before Adjustments

Concept 1 After Adjustments

The following is an updated version to the concept art after Alan's tips on how to improve it. This includes the understanding of where the light source is in the scene.