After getting feedback from Jordan in regards to this scene of mine, I tried different colours to the scene and changing the horizontal line to be less diagonal. I am liking thumbnails 88 and 92 as the colour contrast is interesting which I can see potential for further development to be more polished.
yes 88 is very strong - really pops! You know, I think adding more buildings in the background would lend additional energy to this scene - not as detail or as 'in focus' but something to fill up the skyline. Likewise, I wonder if a foreground element might break-up that hard horizontal line that almost slices across your picture plane?
ReplyDeleteHi Phil,
DeleteThanks for the feedback. I am trying to be bold like you said I should! :)
For this scene, I shall add more buildings to fill up the scene :) In regards to the foreground, I agree with you. Adding elements to it would break the harsh horizon line.