Hey Ayunie - this is already much more characterful this way :)
Just another observation I've been meaning to make: at the moment you've got that classic case of 'everything being in crisp CGI focus' - so in your various scenes when Abigail is in the street etc - everything is in focus, which creates that rather hyperreal CGI-ness, which can rob student films of some of their character. Have you considered controlling the depth of field in these scenes, so that foreground/background elements are actually out of focus and softer? This has the effect of helping you stage your scenes a little more, as you're using focus to direct attention to the main event.
I also think - and I'm sure Alan will have remarked similarly - that I think Abigail's walk-cycle could be improved still further.
Hey Ayunie - this is already much more characterful this way :)
ReplyDeleteJust another observation I've been meaning to make: at the moment you've got that classic case of 'everything being in crisp CGI focus' - so in your various scenes when Abigail is in the street etc - everything is in focus, which creates that rather hyperreal CGI-ness, which can rob student films of some of their character. Have you considered controlling the depth of field in these scenes, so that foreground/background elements are actually out of focus and softer? This has the effect of helping you stage your scenes a little more, as you're using focus to direct attention to the main event.
I also think - and I'm sure Alan will have remarked similarly - that I think Abigail's walk-cycle could be improved still further.
Hey Phil,
DeleteYea, I will look into creating the depth of field but at this stage, I am sorting out the sequence first :)