Idea 6
Title: You’ve
Been Fished
Character 1:
Alan (Zookeeper who is the fisherman)
Character Biography:
> 30 year old man
> Socially awkward individual who had an obsession for animal’s hair
> Works in the zoo because that is the only place that had all kinds of animals with different hair texture that he could care for
> 30 year old man
> Socially awkward individual who had an obsession for animal’s hair
> Works in the zoo because that is the only place that had all kinds of animals with different hair texture that he could care for
Character 2:
Tom (Craftsman/Souvenir Shop Owner)
Character Biography:
> 52 year old craftsman who had a huge obsession over crafting wood
> Works at the Zoo’s souvenir shop
> Found a new obsession: individually customising the handles with intricate designs representing the animals he had used to make the bristles of it.
> Designed a special section in the shop to display and sell his collection
> Business was booming
> 52 year old craftsman who had a huge obsession over crafting wood
> Works at the Zoo’s souvenir shop
> Found a new obsession: individually customising the handles with intricate designs representing the animals he had used to make the bristles of it.
> Designed a special section in the shop to display and sell his collection
> Business was booming
Story:
Alan and Tom
knew each other, as they were colleagues at the Zoo. During a discussion over
lunch, Alan and Tom were brainstorming on how to earn more as they did not earn
much from their jobs. Knowing that Alan has access to all the animals at all
times and his obsession over animal’s hair, Tom took advantage of Alan. He had
manage to successfully convinced Alan to help
him to fish out the animals with the best hair so that he could bring
his idea of crafting a collection of paintbrush as souvenirs come to live. To
cover up their tracks, Alan pretended to be alarmed and reported the missing
animals that were under his care. Posters of the wanted “Fisherman” were seen
all over the zoo. Tom’s new collection at the gift shop, on the other hand, was
flourishing as his artworks were seen as exquisite. Neither felt threatened by
the signs and carried on with the plan. It was until one day, an undercover
officer who was assigned to this case, caught them in action. Alan and Tom were
caught in the net of this under cover investigation.
Title: The
Obsessive Artist
Character Biography:
> Alvaro, a 42-year-old reputable wildlife artist
> Quiet in person but expressive in terms of his artwork
> Employee at Emerald Zoological Gardens
> Perfectionist
> Medium Built, about 5’8” weighing 165 lbs
> Alvaro, a 42-year-old reputable wildlife artist
> Quiet in person but expressive in terms of his artwork
> Employee at Emerald Zoological Gardens
> Perfectionist
> Medium Built, about 5’8” weighing 165 lbs
Artist of all
ages are always seen setting up their easel in front of an animal’s enclosure
of their choice, as they attempt to capture nature’s beauty on to their canvases.
Alvaro is the zoo’s artist. He gained recognition for his artwork after one of
his painting won the prestigious Turner Prize award. An award that only the
best in the field will receive. He is employed to paint animal portraits and
scenes of the zoo that are being sold at its gift shop.
Alvaro’s
artworks are very distinguished and admired because of his precise
brushstrokes. Just like any other day, as Alvaro was in the midst of creating a
masterpiece, he realised that the strokes that began to appear on his canvas was
clumsy and rough. Instinctively, he knew that his favourite paintbrush have been
fully utilised. A perfectionist, he believed that he was not able to function
any further if he does not get his bristles replaced immediately. The search of
finding the perfect bristle triggered the madness.
As an
employee of the zoo, Alvaro had the access to be in it after the closing time.
Alvaro took
this opportunity of the late night stays in the zoo and went on fishing for the
animal he thought would be a perfect match. He started of this craze by netting
smaller animals such squirrels and mongoose. After experimentation, he realised
that this two types of animals was not to his expectation. He went on to fish
for his next victims, a pony and subsequently a badger, always experimenting it
in his small studio at the back of the zoo. Meanwhile, the disappearance of the
animals was an alarming issue at the zoo and signage of rewards were put up to
help capture what the zoo called “The Fisherman”. Alvaro was very determined
and obsessed to find his replacement bristles that these wanted signs were not
even once seen as a slightest threat to this madness. A sinister, sadistic
smile was painted all over Alvaro’s face upon the discovery that the Ox, his
last victim, was the key animal to craft his perfect bristle.
Hi Ayunie,
ReplyDeleteNice developments here: I think, given the 1 min duration, you need to seek ways to economise your storytelling; so idea 7 seems more promising, in so much as you need only establish one character. I don't think it's important really to have the artists as an employee of the zoo; that's a complication in terms of storytelling - just make him an artist in pursuit of the perfect bristle. In this way, I don't even think it helps your story now if he's specifically a painter of animals or that he comes to the zoo to paint them. The idea of an obsessive, competitive artist questing after the 'perfect bristle' is enough of a goal. That specific animals keep disappearing from the local zoo is your mystery - the handiwork of 'The Fisherman' - a character who lures animals out of their enclosures using a rod/net etc. They way in which you put these components together - the way in which you structure the reveal of the culprit etc. - or the way in which you 'punish' the artist becomes the pivot of your story. For example, I can imagine a revenge finale here somehow, where your artist (perhaps he has a luxuriant arty moustache) has his own 'bristles' pulled out, with the final scene being the animals 'painting' something with a brush made from the artist's hair? So, I think in terms of clean storytelling - the artist no longer has to be associated with zoo at all, but rather associated with the quest for the perfect bristles; cue newspaper headlines re. 'The Fisherman Strikes Again At Local Zoo' - so, you've got the character's quest, you've got the causality, but what is the final flourish of story that will leave your audience feeling satisfied? Let's see some further refinements on here, because you're closing in nicely on a resolved premise :)