tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post7173709603150199315..comments2023-05-27T13:10:50.440+01:00Comments on Ayunie Adiana: Space Oddities Film Programme - The Cabinet of Dr Caligari (1920)Ayunie Adianahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-91394684087128724422013-10-02T21:36:21.432+01:002013-10-02T21:36:21.432+01:00Thank you Jackie. Yup, I meant to say uninterestin...Thank you Jackie. Yup, I meant to say uninteresting. Does it not make sense? Ayunie Adianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-64482554055126510142013-09-30T07:51:43.767+01:002013-09-30T07:51:43.767+01:00This is much better, Ayunie! Well done :)
Just tr...This is much better, Ayunie! Well done :)<br /><br />Just try and keep it as impersonal as possible, so avoid phrases like 'what I am trying to say.'<br />Also, you say 'when it happens, it makes the movie uninteresting to further watch it.' Did you mean 'interesting'? <br />Having the required 3 quotes has certainly given your review more 'body' - keep it up! :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com