tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post7100936644112224445..comments2023-05-27T13:10:50.440+01:00Comments on Ayunie Adiana: Secret Lair: Clockwork Priestess Thumbnails (65 - 67)Ayunie Adianahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-596376870700760992013-11-19T18:07:50.990+00:002013-11-19T18:07:50.990+00:00Thanks Jordan for the tip :) I am on it now. Thanks Jordan for the tip :) I am on it now. Ayunie Adianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-56711522055873144392013-11-19T13:35:26.473+00:002013-11-19T13:35:26.473+00:00Hey Ayunie, really nice to see this progress. A fe...Hey Ayunie, really nice to see this progress. A few quick thoughts. Be careful with your lighting, number 67 seems to feel a little washed out with soft light. In your previous thumbnail (60) you had a really nice darkness and single light source, but this latest version feels as though the light is just affecting too much of the image. This is largely because there are no shadows to your objects so the forms feel very disconnected. You may want to create a new document, flatten your concept art down and paint over with shadows and rim lighting. Really make that intense red light pop. :)Jordan Bucknerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08081338627490517416noreply@blogger.com