tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post6642153638813942506..comments2023-05-27T13:10:50.440+01:00Comments on Ayunie Adiana: Script to Screen: StoryboardAyunie Adianahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-55861501024582034742014-02-05T22:51:01.452+00:002014-02-05T22:51:01.452+00:00Thanks Phil. I was going in for close ups(Just thi...Thanks Phil. I was going in for close ups(Just thinking of the camera movement, really) and I didn't consider drawing the expressions. Will do it, pronto. :)Ayunie Adianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14803086427297614704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3871132611780879797.post-73059079199689636402014-02-05T21:44:05.598+00:002014-02-05T21:44:05.598+00:00Hey Ayunie, I can already see from looking at this...Hey Ayunie, I can already see from looking at this storyboard that you're not yet showing us what your character's are thinking - for example, close-ups of faces that show scheming/thinking/reactions. I don't think you've got enough panels in there - for example, the silhouette fighting scene - as this is an action shot, shouldn't you exploring that a bit more dynamically? Don't get me wrong - it's great to get this structure down - but is it very filmic really? Are you really using the full range of camera set-ups - are you adding to your story via camera etc?tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com